Analysis of suddenly apart




we are suddenly apart....
and you broke my heart..
i never thought that you would that to me anyway
our love story was more than a fairytale !!
but it is now over because of my silly mistake..
our song is on the radio,but it doesnt sound the same
and here i am without you ,like a bird with 1 wing !!
am broken....can you hear me?
i need you ....can you feel me?
we are now done...but cant we fix it?

i remember every word you said to me ...and how you made me smile
i still feel your hand on my hand ....and how i looked at you with admire :'(
now suddenly everything went wrong...
and it is killing ME and i cant be strong
we loved each other for 3 years continously
but you took my mistake  so unbearably
that made you freely sell me without any sympathy
you feel satisfied for that break up.....
and i feel bad cuz we cant make up
if u can give me one more chance ...to say am sorry
but you turned your face away...and left me there with worry

what a beautiful gift you are giving me !!
before the valentine's day u call and break up with me..!!
when u said :we need to talk.!...i knew that we are going to fall apart!!
how is it so easy for you, to let me go after all the love i gave to you ..!!


Scheme AAXBXXXCCX XXDDBCCEECC CCAX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110001 01111 110111111110 10110111010 11111001111001 101110111101 011101110111 11111 1111111 11111111 101010011111011111 11111111011111101 11001011 01110101111 11110111 11110110100 11110110110100 11101111 011111111 1111111111110 111111111110 10100111101 0101011101111 11111111111101101 111110111111101011111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,177
Words 247
Sentences 22
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 11, 4
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 294
Words per stanza (avg) 82
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Nadine M.oraby

heyoo !! am Nadine !! an 18 year old egyptian girl!! =D i'm a ballerina,a guitarist and a writer :Dwell actually writing is a hobby..am not really A professional writer but my friends like my poems and think am really talented :) !! so i decided to post my poems here on that site to see your comment about my poems>>>some let me down and some encouraged me to continue writing and correct my mistakes :D thats really great to learn from the greatest poets !! =D i love photography too!! well,i hope you would read my poems and tell me what you think :) dont worry ,i dont bite :-p more…

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