Analysis of The darkness




This ghost was different

From those that have come before

A familiarity to its demeanor

Shook me to my core

I've seen this ghost afore

In nightmares dreams and more

Whispering to me in my sleep

But I cannot hear the call

The clanking of the milkman

On his early morning round

Awakes me to the silence

In my now empty room

As his horse hits the cobbles

The rag and bone man hits the bell

I run inside for a carrot

But me Mum said “go to hell”

In my dream my nightmare

The trees were not my friend

The higher I climbed the canopies

The more the tree would bend

Then I heard the whispers

As clear as daylight tells

Do not be afraid of the darkness

The darkness is your friend


Scheme X A X A A A X X X X B X B C X C X D B D X X X D
Poetic Form
Metre 111100 1111101 0010011010 11111 11111 01101 10011011 1110101 010101 1110101 111010 011101 111101 01011101 11011010 1111111 01111 010111 0101101 010111 111010 11111 111011010 010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 653
Words 134
Sentences 1
Stanzas 24
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 22
Words per stanza (avg) 6
Font size:
 

Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

40 sec read
3

Jane Lomas

All poems included here are just first draft's. I hadn't written poetry for a few years, so to polish my art and find my muse I posted some quickly written poems on these pages so I could see your response. It has helped me by reading your reviews about my poems (all of which I have taken into consideration) all comments have helped me improve my work a great deal. Thank you. I realy enjoy reading all your poems. I find some very insperational, some very heart felt, some very deep, which has helped me to push myself and dig deeper. Very deep, on some occasions. So my own poetry has vastly improved- since I have joined this sight, it has certainly helps splur me on. Thank You for all your imput and replies, please keep it up. It has helped educate me and make me a better writer. So if you would like to read more of my poems (the ones I've taken time over, polished them, played with them, worked on them till they truly worked)for your pleasure I have now with confidence published my own book. A MEASUREMENT OF THE MIND, POEMS OF LIFE AND LOVE. its available on ebook at Amazon. Thank You. more…

All Jane Lomas poems | Jane Lomas Books

0 fans

Discuss this Jane Lomas poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "The darkness" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 11 Jun 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/86424/the-darkness>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    June 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    19
    days
    2
    hours
    5
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem "The Waste Land"?
    A Sylvia Plath
    B W.H. Auden
    C Ezra Pound
    D T.S. Eliot