Analysis of The Floor's Pools Of Civilisation



I would blow her mind inside a second's pause -
to hold back the inevitable is folly,
these moments though are like screams;
footsteps from the gods on our cold lives,
this hard metallic existence is a certainty,
everyone loves and hates me in equal measure,
or at least that is my personal belief,
people seem to desire me, my chambers.
Her tears are soft ripples of agony's regret,
they wash the atmosphere's splendour with ease
as the final moments collect on finely painted skin,
she wants to pull me into her broken thoughts,
I am sure she will go that extra distance soon,
there's hope in her eyes too, though it's dying,
but nevertheless, it is there and it shivers
with an explosive knowledge; too late!

This is the beautiful dance I was created for,
to splinter matter into a thousand shards
and feel the life rush towards dark skies,
all those dreams are to be explored by my tongue
as her body connects with my orgasmic grin,
sparks of passion are a fingerprint's swirl.
With the speed of sensuality's demise
I crash against the carpet's colourful patterns,
the insane ritual's over now, sadly,
she joins me on the floor's pools of civilisation,
there's a kiss smoking in the aftermath
as the light leaves a poem on her face.


Scheme XAXXAXXBXXCXXXBX XXDXCXDXACXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11101010101 111001000110 1101111 110111011 1101001010100 10101101010 11111110001 10110101110 0111101101 1101111 10101001110101 11111010101 111111110101 1100111110 10011110110 110101011 1101001110101 11010010101 010110111 11111101111 1010011111 11101011 1011101 110101110 001110110 111101111 101100010 1011010101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,209
Words 220
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 16, 12
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 490
Words per stanza (avg) 110
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Submitted on June 04, 2010

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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