Analysis of The murmur



This murmur called life
Pretends to be a happy child
But all it does is cry
This murmur called life
Wants to walk tall
But it falls
Maybe one night
God will send his chime
And so this murmur called life
Will learn to be a happy child after all!


Scheme AbcAdefgad
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 11011 01110101 111111 11011 1111 111 1011 11111 0111011 11110101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 235
Words 50
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 194
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Submitted by beansbaxter on May 08, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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