Analysis of Thoughts

Neil McLeod 1947 (Oxford)



I rise
In the morning
See skies
In the morning,
And there
With the dawning
Are you.

Coffee
Vapours drifting
Set
My mind drifting
And
The thought lifting
Comes through.

Spring-fields
Of day time
Run head back
In day time
Alone
Now, a gay time
On dew.

At noon
In the stillness
I lie warm
In the stillness
And dream
Of that fullness
I drew.

Evening
Shades falling
Blue
Guitar calling
A song
It is calling
For you.


Scheme aBaBxbc xbxbxbc xdxdxdc xExExec bbcbxbc
Poetic Form Tetractys  (71%)
Metre 11 0010 11 0010 01 1010 11 10 110 1 1110 0 0110 11 11 111 111 011 01 1011 11 11 0010 111 0010 01 1110 11 10 110 1 0110 01 1110 11
Characters 376
Words 78
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 7, 7
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 9
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted by NeilMcLeod on January 11, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Neil McLeod

Born in Oxford, raised in Kenya, past winner of Los Slamgeles Poetry Slam and author of abitingchance.blogspot.comand "The First Thanksgiving".Doctor McLeod is a performing poet who has recited at Highland Games, dinners and Burns Nights for the last 36 years. He is happily married, lives and works in Los Angeles,has three children, and practices as a dentist on Sunset Boulevard:http://www.drneilmcleod.com/He can be contacted by e-mail at drneilmcleod@yahoo.com and will willingly entertain requests to share his work with permission. more…

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