Analysis of True Friendship



Early morning practices, Cold morning air;
All the great memories the three of us share;
My first extra baseball hit went foul, but we all thought it went fair;
I came in with my head down and you two were the only two there;
I felt you were the only two that cared;
Even at my lowest point, I could count on the two of you, even though I said the three of us were through;
Imma start with evan, we had great times, esp in babe ruth;
We played for the west, we were the best, who would of known baseball would take us on this quest;
Now on to Hayden, He wanted me to change, he put me to the test, you both only wanted the best,
for me;
If I needed anything, you both would do anything you can, d*mn, I never had a true friend;
I hope someday we can be someones hero, and make them say I wish I have a friendship like the TRIO.


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Characters 816
Words 170
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 53
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 630
Words per stanza (avg) 170
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Submitted on January 02, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Joey Knepp

I'm 19 years old. I have a son whos name is Liam hes turning one oct. 30. I just now started writing because i feel it gets my feelings out and its better then letting my feelings build and fighting. more…

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