Analysis of When will end?



I honestly cannot wait for the times to change...

To wake from this haze

Find beauty in this maze

Instead of hateful selfish people, the world contains..

Would it be a better place if we all became one race?

Or would the world become a desolate vision, designed by only one face?

A sad thought to contemplate...

A world where we become less human than an ape..

Slaves designed for the slaughter..

Freedom becomes a distant whisper..

For the future of our sons and daughter

Taken long before they are thought of...

Numbered to serve some deviant monster..

Never knowing what life was made of..

This is not the way it ends..

Armaggeddon dawns on those who fled

Hiding from the woes that's wept..

Mother nature is our mother..

A nurturer of all our brothers

Keeper of the keys to everything..

Manifest in the world we are seeing..

She will cause no end of strife..

As the negative forces try to take her life

There's so much more for her in store..

Just her children won't listen with their endless wars..

fighting over stupidity and nothing more..

Till she cannot take the torture

And BOOM we are no more!


Scheme X A A X B B X X C C C D C D X X X C X E E F F G X G C G
Poetic Form
Metre 110010110111 11111 110011 0111010100101 11101011110111 1101010100100111011 011110 011101110111 1011010 100101010 10101101010 101011111 1011110010 101011111 1110111 111111 1010111 101011010 0100111010 10101110 100011110 1111111 101001011101 11111001 101011011101 101001000101 11101010 011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,080
Words 200
Sentences 22
Stanzas 28
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 31
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Geni Kelepouris

I began writing when i was 16. I enjoy expressing myself through all forms of art ( my profile pic is one of my art pieces). I have had a life full of tragedies and suffer post traumatic stress. I find that art and writing soothes my soul and allows me to heal from all the pain that has been haunting me. I have an obsession with existence and love nothing more than to discuss all the different theories of why we are here. My poems cover a range of topics from love and inspiration to complete random mania. There are also some very deep poems that i needed to write to get the sorrow from my life. I just hope whoever is reading them enjoys them. more…

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