Analysis of Temerity

Chirom kingking Devi 1998 (Manipur)



Little by little it kills me
The act of hiding each deeds
Slowly and deeply it hurts me
Where ignorance and vagueness rises.

Excuses are sentences that come out
While pretend is what is performed
Two of us actors trying to save the scene
Or the world will call us player .

One still ready to improve
Other trying to give up for another
Complications is described here
For Suffering is felt along with anger .

Being faithful isn't enough
Better Treatments turn fake
Each shedding slough
And creating thunderstrike.

Lake of understanding
Change of priority
Better if it starts ending
To avoid further temerity.


Scheme AXAX XXXB XBXB CDCD EAEA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 10110111 0111011 10010111 110001010 0101100111 10111101 11110101101 10111110 1110101 10101111010 0101011 11001101110 10101001 101011 1101 00101 11010 110100 1011110 101100100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 591
Words 103
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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