Analysis of Ignoble Life



We live in the shadows of your cursed survival
 not being killed when so many of you were
the endless rows of benighted headstones
telling of memories never to be
where you wander among them
pledging your heart to what unrequited
condemns you to time
we walk together through years of separation
the voices of the dead confirming
the tryst of our silence
 forever pretending that a lyric
can be written after the music stops
that its words can be sung by the Angel guardians
of those long departed
and ignoring my devotion
you embrace the rejection of  
the one who never loved you back…
the paramour who condemns you to live in misery
and to live with me
—jilted by death

(Watching ‘Hemingway’ On PBS: April, 2021)


Scheme AXXBXXXCXXXXXXCXXBBX A
Poetic Form
Metre 11001111010 11011110110 010110101 1011001011 1110011 101111010 01111 11010111010 010101010 0111010 0100101010 1110100101 1111111010100 111010 00101010 10100101 01110111 011011110100 01111 1011 10101110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 704
Words 128
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 20, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 288
Words per stanza (avg) 64
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Submitted by sage48 on April 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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