Analysis of Off With The Shoes

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



When it is seen to observe,
One has decided to choose...
The removing of their shoes.
In public to do.
With a walking away from ignorance.
This decision made,
Will leave those to believe...
One who has done this,
Could care less...
Who is or is not impressed.
About a decision made,
Final on its arrival.
And determined to achieve,
A destination to leave...
Behind an experience,
Not to repeat to revisit...
What has to them,
Nothing new to learn.
Or has long lasting benefits.
Ignorance to tolerate,
The presence of it...
Remains as is,
Regardless who dresses to address...
The insignificance,
Of their kept to nourish pretensions!


Scheme ABBCDEFGHIEJFFDKLMNOKPHDQ
Poetic Form Tetractys  (44%)
Metre 1111101 111011 0010111 01011 1010011100 10101 111101 11111 111 1111101 0100101 1011010 0010101 001011 0110100 11011010 1111 10111 11110100 100110 01011 0111 01011011 00100 111110010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 608
Words 108
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 486
Words per stanza (avg) 108
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Submitted by lpahtillah on April 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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