Analysis of Fabulation

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



Fabulation to obtain,
Is an incredible feeling to achieve.
Regardless,
Of how the meaning is defined.
And by who or whomever,
Seeking to place a label on it.
With a hope this describes,
In a word that identifies...
What is felt to quickly address it!

'Fabulation?
Is not a word I have heard before.'

I am not surprised at all.
If you have not yet felt 'fabulous'.
Or mornings to awaken,
Without aches or pains...
Unwanted or welcome them.
Or volunteer to accept,
The stress of life lived to expect.
And not a muscle in your body,
Depends on applying medication?
Leaving you to notice,
You feel guilty not to have...
No complaints.
No lies to tell to yourself.
And everywhere you go,
The air seems to be scented...
With mint and roses to smell?
Fabulation has arrived!

'Okay!
Now tell me this.
How long does this feeling you have,
Lasts?'

I can not tell you that.
However...
I can tell you this.

I hope it will last,
Longer than my explanation of it.
And God allows me,
To keep my mouth shut.

Without it to announce,
How I feel.
Knowing...
A selling of a blessing to receive,
To you or anyone else...
Is mine to keep.
And not an intention,
To brag or create envy!

'God giveth and taketh awayeth!'

I know.
God works in mysterious ways.
To test us all!

'Ssshhh.
Keep your voice down.

GOD?
I AM HERE.
YOUR FAITHFUL SERVANT.
PLEASE...
SEE ME READY AND PREPARED,
FIT!
FOR A BESTOWING...
OF YOUR 'FABULATION'!

LOL...
You're too funny!


Scheme ABCXDEXXE AX FCGXXXXHGCIXXJXXX XKIX XDK XEHX XXLBXXGH X JXF CX XXXXXELA FH
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 11010010101 010 11010101 0111010 101101011 101101 0011010 11111011 1 110111101 1110111 111111100 1101010 01111 0101101 101101 01111101 010100110 011010010 101110 1110111 101 1111101 01011 0111110 1101011 1101 1 1111 11111011 1 111111 10 11111 11111 101101011 01011 11111 011101 111 10 0101010101 111101 1111 011010 1110110 1100101 11 11001001 1111 1 1111 1 111 11010 1 1110001 1 10010 111 1 1110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,365
Words 264
Sentences 47
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 9, 2, 17, 4, 3, 4, 8, 1, 3, 2, 8, 2
Lines Amount 63
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted by lpahtillah on April 29, 2021

Modified on April 06, 2023

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