Analysis of Qualities We All Have

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



No one has yet to live,
To experience everything there is...
That life to adventure and explores,
Offers.
And the many who pray,
That one day will come...
With it wished.
To spend and get,
An abundance of money,
They did not earned.
Discovering it done to happen.
But...
Found it difficult to use it.
Because of guilt to feel.

People like this...
Can not be said,
To be out of their minds.
Anyone like that,
Searching for a way to give it back.
In times like these...
When people have grown,
Accustomed to pinching pennies.
Worrying about bills to pay.
Food to eat.
And keeping a place,
Where it is safe to sleep...
Under and protected.
The last thing,
They should concerned themselves...
About,
Is being selfish.
With such...
A self serving thoughtlessness.
What a crazy thing to do.

Afterall...
Are we not taught,
A good deed done for others...
Guarantees,
Halos to adorn our heads.
Wings and golden slippers.
Trumpets heard to play.
Angelic voices in harmony singing.
And a Heaven,
Blissful.
To never ever end.
With our favorite beverage to sip,
Tip toeing through...
The brightest of white clouds.
If...
We sacrifice our human needs,
On Earth!

Representing the qualities we all have.
Right?


Scheme XAXBCXXXXXDXXX XXXXXEXECXXXXFXXXXAG XXBEXBCFDXXXGXXXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 101001011 111010001 10 001011 11111 111 1101 1010110 1111 010011110 1 11100111 011111 1011 1111 111111 1011 101011111 0111 11011 01011010 10001111 111 01001 111111 100010 011 110101 01 11010 11 01101 1010111 10 1111 0111110 01 10101101 101010 10111 1010010010 0010 10 110101 11010010011 1101 010111 1 11010101 11 0100100111 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,142
Words 207
Sentences 37
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 14, 20, 17, 2
Lines Amount 53
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 228
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Submitted by lpahtillah on May 08, 2021

Modified on April 22, 2023

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