The Visit While I Sleep
While I Sleep
While the Moon is among the Stars
I sleep
During the darkness in the room
A presence…heaviness upon my Chest
Chills…through-out my body
Fearful to open my eyes
Dismissed as a dream, tried to sleep
Darkness felt endless, until Moon fell Asleep…finally the light filled the room
Waking…anxiously…events of the night
Remembering…tapping on my shoulder
Weeks after Dad had passed
Concluded: The presence night before…the other part of Heart came to Visit…The only way she could
Consoling my grief
About this poem
This poem is about an experience i had one night, when I was sleeping and felt a heaviness on my chest that lasted for a few minutes. She visited me the only way she could.
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Written on April 19, 2020
Submitted by georgem.97372 on July 30, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 544 |
| Words | 102 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 14 |
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