"Surrender"
Lenamarie Clark 1981 (Indianapolis,Indiana)
I'll never be the same as
my soul is opened.
Her eyes with dark eye shadow
have made me shy and tame.
I surrender my all just for her,
im soft and tender i will not fall when im around her,i win when i surrender.
I'll surrender and will make her my redeemer, my soul mate and keeper, in the mirror i see her reflection i take many steps back.
I'll Surrender my heart for her,my
love for her don't make me the same.
I'm free inside the trap and that's a wrap...
About this poem
Poem is about me surrendering my love to those whom I love ❤
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Written on August 20, 2022
Submitted by PoetFeather on August 23, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 468 |
Words | 108 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1 |
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