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Evening

Talia Garza Hernandez

Triolet
The sad walls carrying wild herbs
terrace is empty of peasants
the elderflower conserves
ivory petals tallest proverbs
the light of the sun still probes
trees, teach this student brilliants seeds,
ways to hide the twilight creeds
my sandals show my feet nudes

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Written on June 15, 2023

Submitted by talygarza on June 15, 2023

Modified by talygarza on June 15, 2023

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Scheme ABAACDDE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 263
Words 48
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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