Creakes

Valiantstar 1961 (Sydney)



Sneak down the stairs,
Don't wake the hoards.

Bones creaking
In tune with the boards.

A good day's work
The old dogs are numb.

I had avoided this day,
But it had to come.

Cob with his hernia  
And one and a half hands

Me with half a brain

Between us a man!

We got the job done

In very good time

The old girl did good.

In her bilge a little brine.

The weather was fair the tide was right,

The old fellas did it!

With no one in sight.
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Written on November 21, 2023

Submitted by myway6119 on November 20, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XA XA XB XB XX X X X X X X C X C
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 453
Words 119
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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