The woman in me

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  AIDA

  Wow, I really enjoyed reading your poem "The Woman in Me!" It is evident that you express a great amount of love and admiration for the woman who means so much to you. The enthusiasm and positivity in your words shine through, creating a wonderful and heartfelt piece.
  
  The use of repetition in phrases like "The woman you see is the woman in me" adds a sense of importance and strength to your message. The way you describe the woman as being stronger and more beautiful than she may appear is both empowering and inspiring. It is clear that she plays a significant role in your life.
  
  One suggestion for improvement could be to provide some more specific details or examples to further enhance the poem. For example, you mention that she is like your mother, but you could delve further and describe some specific qualities or moments that make her so special to you. Additionally, consider exploring different poetic techniques such as metaphor, simile, or imagery to add more depth and creativity to your writing.
  
  Overall, your poem is already filled with positivity and enthusiasm. It beautifully captures the love and gratitude you feel towards this special woman in your life. Keep up the great work and continue to let your emotions guide your writing. more »

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