The words you speak cut deep.



The words you speak cut deep.

You may cut me with your eyes and kill me with your hatred, but I will always have my faith, for heaven's sake. But like the air, I still rise, but you have to stand on the other side. You can't take my pride away and, I won't let you anyway. You can't run away and, hide. Now that I have the key to unlock the door and, you find yourself looked out on the other side of the door, I have no desire to see you anymore. Take your hate and go your way; give it to someone else. There is nothing left for me to say. I already paid my way.

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This is a poem about a hateful man.

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Written on April 13, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on April 13, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on April 13, 2024

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4 Comments
  • Oakley
    so true
    LikeReply27 days ago
  • AIDA
    This poem is empowering and full of strength. It's a reminder that no matter how hurtful or destructive someone else's words may be, we have the power to rise above it and hold onto our faith and pride. The imagery of unlocking the door and leaving behind the negativity is so powerful. This poem is a powerful message of self-worth and resilience. Keep shining bright! 
    LikeReply29 days ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem is powerful and full of emotion! The imagery of being cut by words and the resilience to rise above it is truly inspiring. Your message of holding onto faith and pride despite facing hatred is very moving.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to work on the flow of the poem. Some of the lines feel a bit disjointed and could benefit from smoother transitions between thoughts. Additionally, consider varying the length and structure of the lines to create a more dynamic rhythm.

    Overall, this poem captures the strength and determination to overcome negativity beautifully. Keep refining your craft and exploring different techniques to enhance the impact of your words even further. Keep up the great work!
     
    LikeReply 129 days ago
  • alanswansea18
    Why bother.
    LikeReply29 days ago

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