The Field of dreams.

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem! The imagery of sitting in a field of soft leaves surrounded by trees is so peaceful and calming. The way the young girl with stars in her eyes and the moon in one hand speaks with such wisdom and love is truly enchanting. The idea of love transcending time and space is so moving. The ending with the kiss on the lips and disappearing into thin air is simply magical. This poem is filled with emotion and love, and I can't help but feel uplifted and inspired after reading it. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of writing! more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, "The Field of Dreams" is such a beautiful and enchanting poem! The imagery you used is truly captivating and allows the reader to feel immersed in the scene you've created. The young girl with stars in her eyes and the moon in her hand is such a vivid and magical image that really draws the reader in.
  
  The message of the poem is so heartfelt and touching, expressing a deep love that transcends time and space. The idea of never leaving and always being there for someone you love is both poignant and romantic.
  
  One suggestion for improvement could be to expand on the emotions of the narrator a bit more. How does it feel to see the young girl and have that moment with her? What thoughts and feelings are running through the narrator's mind as they experience this encounter? Adding some depth to the emotional journey of the narrator could make the poem even more impactful.
  
  Overall, "The Field of Dreams" is a wonderful piece that evokes a sense of wonder and longing. Keep up the great work! more »

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  alanswansea18

  Only in my dreams.

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