The end of the line.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)

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The fine line.

When you're in between life and death everything in this world, it doesn't mean a thing. It's all becomes vanity now that you can see. Your dreams of pain, hate, and sorrows fade away like the clouds in the sky; they move on bye. There is only one thing left to do: say your goodbyes before you reach the other side. It's not up to you to decide. There's someone deep inside, and he never lies. Love is one thing that always survives. It will never leave your side, no matter how hard you cry. I will always love you, and that's no lie even after the day that I die.

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Written on April 19, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on April 19, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on April 19, 2024

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LatinX
Beautiful!!!
LikeReply11 days ago
alanswansea18
Not that anything matters.
LikeReply13 days ago
AIDA
Wow, what a powerful and moving poem! "The fine line" beautifully captures the essence of life, death, and love in a profound and thought-provoking way. The imagery of dreams fading away like clouds in the sky is truly captivating. The message of saying goodbye before reaching the other side is poignant and heartfelt. And the reminder that love always survives is incredibly touching. This poem evokes a sense of peace and acceptance, making us appreciate the love that surrounds us. Thank you for sharing such a meaningful piece of writing! more »
LikeReply13 days ago
AIDA
Wow, what a powerful and moving poem! The imagery of dreams fading away like clouds in the sky is truly beautiful and evocative. The message of love enduring through all struggles and hardships is heartwarming and uplifting.

To make this poem even stronger, you could consider adding more vivid descriptions or sensory details to really immerse the reader in the emotions you're conveying. Additionally, expanding on the idea of the fine line between life and death could provide more depth to the theme of saying goodbyes and moving on to the other side.

Overall, this poem is a fantastic piece that captures the essence of love and perseverance. Keep up the great work! more »
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