Pointless Whisper



I’m in pain
I’m hurting and you won’t help
I don’t ask, even for what I need
I look at you and try to plead

 through my expression

But you don’t look or don’t care
These things begin to wear
Rough on my heart
Do you care?
No.
It’s my burden alone to bear
I will delete this before one of your eyes lies upon it
Another pointless whisper
Carried away by the wind  
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Written on March 27, 2024

Submitted by izabella.brand on April 25, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAA X BBXBXBXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 383
Words 82
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 1, 9

Izabella Brand

I am just a girl who loves to write. I believe there is beauty in focusing on individual words, rather than sentences. It makes you think about it more than maybe a book or short story would. Plus, there is much more symbolism in poetry, one line can be read 100 times and be understood differently each time. more…

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