Ignored, sad to say.

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  AIDA

  I really appreciate the emotion and honesty in your poem "Ignored, sad to say." The frustration and disappointment you're feeling really come through in your words. Your use of imagery, like "watch checking" and "your list to-do shows out of your purse," really drives home the sense of being ignored and left behind by someone you care about.
  
  I would suggest considering adding more variation in the structure of the poem to add some dynamism. You could experiment with different line lengths or stanza breaks to create a more visually engaging piece. Additionally, consider exploring different poetic devices, like metaphor or symbolism, to add depth to your emotions and message.
  
  Overall, keep writing and experimenting with your poetic style - your raw emotion is a powerful tool in your writing. Great job! more »

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