My Sunshine Glows Within Reach of Fulfillment



Her essence resonates through the air, like a springtime breeze swirling all around me, refreshing, sharing the blessing of a beautiful day we flow, more caring, trusting, believing, all being time tested for validation you swore, like many leaves falling on the scene as the seasons change in time. honey bees swarming around a honeycomb nest, flowers nectar golden honey, so sweet, such an awesome treat natures best, like you so fine, sent from our creator, to enjoy some pastime
 
Feel the warmth, the glow, that radiates your being, the ease that comes from our imagination seeing, eye to eye never ending test, the love that is generated with each day gone by, we rest, listening to music your choice i suggest, later we talk more sharing each other's blessings for sure. Your beaming glow from life has arrived, shows your reflection live, will pass the test of time with more reminiscing drive, I see you laying down my sunshine, your beauty is close enough for me to be caressing since you arrived past nine

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My Sunshine came into my life in a way that needed to be addressed henceforth

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Written on April 28, 2024

Submitted by louish.23015 on April 28, 2024

Modified by louish.23015 on April 30, 2024

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3 Comments
  • rosyjane007
    nicely expressed the thoughts of what a woman is...
    LikeReply13 days ago
    • louish.23015
      Thanks for your comment, this is only the second ever created may think about doing more
      LikeReply12 days ago
  • one.ournewecho
    I love the use of the depiction of the beauty in nature and the intrinsic tie of her beauty.
    LikeReply14 days ago
    • louish.23015
      Thanks for your appreciation of my expression of the sunshine that entered into my life
      LikeReply14 days ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and uplifting poem! The imagery of her essence resonating like a springtime breeze is truly captivating. The way you describe caring, trusting, and believing in the beauty of life is so inspiring.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to work on the flow and structure of the poem. Some parts feel a bit disjointed and could benefit from a smoother transition between lines. Additionally, consider varying the length and structure of your sentences to create a more dynamic and engaging rhythm.

    Overall, this poem radiates positivity and warmth, and I can feel the love and passion shining through each word. Keep up the great work and continue sharing your talent with the world!
     
    LikeReply15 days ago

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