My Exodus



Like a voo-doo doll I was under his control
No way to escape
In this world there is no one to console
I fake smile through my reality
Knowing deep within
Someday my dream would find me
This world is so fake
Our minds are gone
Our hearts have been misplaced
Never again will I swallow the seed of bitterness
I was defeated once
My mind since has learned of bliss
Free from the cage of abyss
Once you realize your soul is gold
You become free
The light within you will always glow
This is my Exodus
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Written on 2023

Submitted by amandak on May 03, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABACDCEFGHIJJKCLH
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 496
Words 98
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17

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2 Comments
  • alanswansea18
    Very nice. Don't take this wrong but you are not the ugly girl in my last poem. But I'm sure you know that.
    LikeReply11 days ago
  • Wbrooks431
    Beautiful
    LikeReply 114 days ago

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