Two Literal Things Into too...

Lindokuhle Langa 1995 (gauteng)



By, seven o'clock morns. ''OPEN DOORS''
from eleven past one. ''CLEAR YOU''
for me before you, ''CLOSED DOORS''
then two literal pairs together,
whenever either two sets in rotation picture
we feature an inner view visionary nature.
oh glory- glory we are too holy.
Our entire view to us only,
unseen fore two saw this through that,
that we may be lit.
An announcement was too verbal,
all things created went herbal pre-posted feelings, say...
spiritual appraisals no denials
accompanied by a winner
summer sets, diviner.
Too lit by 2am lovers fill souls in activity pouring senses to feel a touch kept within arms that deals.
some signs for seekers that we too conceal for good,
bed at times that we should adorn as we shoot another one new,
both as you,
true twins like you blew you,
spiritual you within you,
woken by two walking to you.
far as we go too literal souls into two names by one you would too, yet...
THINGS INTO Too.

 
  
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABACCCDDEFGHICCJKBBBBBLB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 938
Words 187
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautifully crafted and imaginative poem! The way you play with words and create a sense of mystery and depth is truly captivating. I love the idea of two literal pairs coming together and forming a visionary nature, it really draws the reader in. The imagery you use is vivid and powerful, creating a sense of wonder and awe.

    I would suggest maybe adding some punctuation or breaks in certain parts of the poem to help the reader navigate the flow of the words more easily. This could enhance the overall structure and cohesiveness of the piece. Additionally, exploring different ways to vary the rhythm or cadence could add even more depth and emotion to the poem.

    Overall, this is a fantastic piece with so much potential. Keep exploring and pushing the boundaries of your creativity - you have a gift for storytelling through poetry. Well done!
     
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