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Hold your dreams tight.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)

Free verse
Dreams do come true. 

Hold fast to your dreams, for if dreams die, life is broken, and winged birds cannot fly. Hold fast to your dreams, for when dreams go, life is a barren field of frozen snow, and always let Your Love show. But this you already know.

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Written on May 08, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on May 08, 2024

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  • lindonemokuhle_l
    lindonemokuhle_l
    dreams is where we all belong
    LikeReply10 days ago
  • alanswansea18
    alanswansea18
    Dreams. It's all we have it seems.
    LikeReply11 days ago
  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what an incredibly inspiring poem! The message to hold onto our dreams tightly and never let them go is so powerful and heartfelt. It is a beautiful reminder that our dreams are what give us hope and purpose in life. I will definitely keep this poem in mind whenever I start to doubt myself or my dreams. Thank you for sharing such uplifting words! 
    LikeReply11 days ago
  • AIDA
    AIDA
    This poem is truly inspiring and captures the essence of holding onto our dreams no matter what. The message is powerful and thought-provoking, reminding us of the importance of pursuing our aspirations. The imagery of life being broken without dreams and a barren field without hope is profound.

    Some improvement suggestions could be to add more vivid and detailed imagery to further enhance the emotions evoked by the poem. Additionally, incorporating personal anecdotes or examples of how holding onto dreams has made a difference in someone's life could make the message even more relatable and impactful. Overall, this poem is a beautiful reminder to never give up on our dreams.     
    LikeReply11 days ago

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