Make Up Your Mind
Oh! You had been back at home and I was not informed,
Is this mean I don't have the right to say;”welcome home?
Oh! You have been backed at home and I was hurt and torn;
You mean I have no right anymore to be happy...but to shrink and mourn...?
When you left, you told me you will always write to me,
You will wait for my reply full of love and desire.
We were happy back then, because you know I love you;
You stated to me also that you have loved me too.
That's why I trusted your word you had told, before leaving abroad;
You said; you will always be the same and you will never change.
The promised you sweetly stated, was fake and you are busted...;
You've arrived but you made me cried, seeing someone new in your side.
Oh! My trusted Sweetheart you have been back home and you broke my heart.
The promises you had uttered, vanishes and well scattered.
May I never be fooled again... anyhow, to lose you is my gain.
Oh! My Immature one! Make up your mind, never hurt anyone!
By Ging Alburo
Written March, 2012
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Submitted by ging_a on October 02, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | XXAA XBCC XXXX XXXX B X |
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Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,002 |
Words | 199 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 1, 1 |
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