Talygarza's comments

Here's the list of comments submitted by talygarza — There are currently 107 comments total.

	This anti war poem is heartbreaking, no words to express the enormous pain wars bring although this human tendency to violence and self destruction continues between groups or nations. This poem is indicative of the tragedy behind every single life that ends in wars. more » 10 hours ago	View
	This poem brings good vibes for someone who feels hopeless, a bad emotion that human beings often carries. 10 hours ago	View
	oh no is just practice, I try to write all days at least one page. No imitation and if I can I like rhymes in Spanish, although I love free verse I distrust enthusiasm about free verse, anyway I respect the right to write whatever a person wants. more » 11 hours ago	View
	Dramatic, stunning image, another stanza would be grate enhancing the poem. 1 day ago	View
	I liked the sincerity showing a detachment, you could explore more that kind of emotions, not everything needs to be about happiness, the thing is to write something that can engage readers. 2 days ago	View
	of course 4 days ago	View
	This poem is more deep expressing situations in poetic form. 4 days ago	View
	Interesting poem, I understand that explores emotions like sadness, pain, desolation, hopeless not finding an exit to that. 4 days ago	View
	Is touching when reading poems about aging. Congrats. 6 days ago	View
	I liked the vivid description you gave about the elements of a caring garden and the person who keeps it, transporting the reader to that place. 6 days ago	View
	Lovely image, next time I’m going to be more attentive to lighthouses they offer so much to poetic ideas. 6 days ago	View
	thanks I loved it too, looks great near my poem isn’t? 7 days ago	View
	thanks, although I must say that I’m not satisfied with the things I write, anyway I like writing. 8 days ago	View
	Lovely celebration of nature and its flourishing during spring through the device of trees, expressed with clarity without excess. 10 days ago	View
	Wise poem; words can hurt or shock the peace. 10 days ago	View
	is terrible 12 days ago	View
	is a fascinating city, the main historical sites aren’t difficult to reach, I loved every step there. 12 days ago	View
	The perfect description someone can write about the English countryside mixed with everyday life. 12 days ago	View
	A great poem, I think is pedagogical. 14 days ago	View
	Very optimistic, merges individual and collective cooperation pointing a path to reach freedom. 14 days ago	View
	thanks, I need to practice more as I’m not native speaker. 14 days ago	View
	Very poignant meditations, more poetry like this truly concerned with human nature. Inspired me good thoughts. 15 days ago	View
	write all you can 15 days ago	View
	no please 15 days ago	View
	Seems peculiar and dreamy although I consider the poem needs to explore more the imagery of the door and its relevance. Interesting poetic theme. 16 days ago	View