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  April 2021     17 hours ago

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Remaining Unchanged And Envied

Unchanged to remain.
Those same old games.
Played for no gain.

Staying to please the people.
Enjoying reliving sequels of the past.

Unchanged.
Are those same played games.
Staying to please the people.
Hoping to want it wished,
A past...

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Disgusting Lust Discussed

Disgusting.
And publicly discussed.
Is a lust.
To defend it and protect,
One corrupted yet kept trusted.
With a mind morally messed up.

And is believed by the majority of people,
Has obtain the qualities to sit...
In the position of...

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The Inevitable Shown

The inevitable shown.
With evidence revealed.
For many years to make known.
A normalcy unraveling,
Needs not to have a psychologist...
Or a scientist to condone.

Repeatedly is the proof produced.
Effectively applied to deny.
The pieces of...

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Willow Blooms

This Willow blooms.
With a delivery unexpectedly fresh.
Too genuine.
Words alone can not express,
What Willow has captured.
Musically to address.

So different and yet,
One listen to Willow.
And her latest flight.
Taken to listening...

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My Calling To Write

My calling to write.
From a young kid to do it.
I must admit,
That decision made...
Came from somewhere else.
And all I then knew,
I was attracted to writing.
On walls in an apartment.
Where I grew up to use them,
As a development to...

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Enrique, thank you for ur comment.

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Thank you 4 comments.

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Hi, amandak.45897, thank you very much. Lawrence

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Hi, Edwin...your comments remind me of what I use to experience on another poetry website. Now, today? I make sure what I write is done. Then close out my submission to Poetry.com. I've also changed my password a few times as well. 

18 days ago

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Hi, Edwin Ray...thank you for your latest comments. Although, I must admit this, I have no idea what they mean. Explain.

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Be easy with that Breezy feeling

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I lived on Perrin Beital Road. Between 410 and 1604. The bigger loop surrounding San Antonio. Back in the 80s.

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Hi Edwin. Don't allow your creative process prevent to stop what this 'force' chooses you to do. Through your poetic revelations. Edwin? You and I both have been blessed with a gift. Know this. 

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Edwin? One day we have to meet. You know, I actually lived in San Antonio, Texas yrs ago. I love that place. Thanks again for your 'right on comments'. Wonderful they are to read.

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LOLOL...Edwin? You R 2 much! U actually follow and know exactly what I am doing with this submission. I wish I had added them and the judge singing the National Anthem at the end of my 'poem'. Thank you. Edwin? I laughed so hard at your comments. They were great. 

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Edwin? I find your comments hilarious. You have stand-up comedian potential. lol

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Hi, EdwinRayTanguma. I appreciate your comments on 'What Is Meant To Intend'. Since as a writer, I am not swayed by religious or political beliefs others may or may not have. I can only admit being aware and conscious of current events. Events that should to all us conscious, be serious about how humanity is affected by them. I am a writer. Powerless to offer remedies or solutions. I comment on what I observe and see from my perspective. Whether or not my point of view is accepted. Like those who may read my submissions to Poetry.com...living in an environment with problems existing.
This permits and provides me with incentive. And, I do the best I can to respect beliefs that are not my own to attempt to influence anyone. However, I do encourage thinking as a process that, hopefully, promotes understanding. Thanks again. Lawrence 

24 days ago

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Hi. So much I thank you for your comments. It seems that many refuse to see or accept to believe the severity of these times we live. Too much it is assumed. That these occurrences are isolated events. They are not. Especially when we live in a country in which 'children' can obtain and use weapons creating havoc and violence on the streets where we live. As if this increasing madness of sadness is a sign of how sick this craze has become to be normalized! Thank you, once again, alanswansea18. Your comments I appreciate very much. Lawrence 

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Hi Nebula. I like ur name. Thank you for ur comments. I have been writing in several forms & different formats, mostly to do to place more emphasis on my chosen topic. Some get 'it'. Some 'don't'. That you 'did' amazes me. These days, many take their faith and religious belief with the same feeling as if shopping at a mall to catch a bargain. And then to thank God! Thanks again. Have a great day. Peace/Blessings, Lawrence 

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Thank you. Enjoyed ur comments. Happy Holidays. Lawrence

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