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  April 2021     1 hour ago

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Fly Now I Do Higher

What you brought to introduce,
Into my life.
Filled within me an emptiness.
Never before to explore nor adventure.
More than the limits.
Restricted to reminisce,
My past experiences.
Loyal I became to disappointments.

But today and now,
...

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Falling Farther Behind

It has been said and for decades seen.
An updating to renovated,
A past to have had.
Falling farther behind a future to have.
To believe the increasing the cost of living.
Helps to healthy an aging economy.

New buildings are built.
Where...

by Lawrence S. Pertillar

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Too Deep And Locked Up

Too deep.
With a faith locked up,
In my soul.
My mind is so locked up.
In a faith I hold.
I'm blessed to believe in myself.
No matter where I go.

I felt down feeling low.
Yes!
And from my eyes tears flowed.
Yes!
I had been on my knees...

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Raise Up Your Head

Leave behind what's bugging you.
Move from it to go.
Don't be baited to argue.
Move from that to go.
Away!

Raise up your head giving praises...
To The Lord.

Leave behind what's bugging you.
Refuse to argue with a fool.
Choose this to do...

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Inhale

Close your beautiful eyes.
Then slowly inhale,
The touch on your lips.
Felt to feel the love of my kiss.
Not to exhale a moment like this.
Kept to keep inside your heart.
And mine.
Forever to feel,
Left as breathless to miss...
Again and...

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Chris? 'Wrapped Up In You'...is brilliantly written. From beginning to end. Yes! Within your expression so much you allow to confess just how you feel. After MANY years of my own poetic writings, I am only recently unpeeling to reveal what it is deeply felt. Easy I've become to realize isn't easy. Thank you. L 

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Mr. Chris E. Morganroth IV? You, sir, are a tremendous artist. Your approach reminds me of Poe. Heartfelt. Deep in expression. Yet, available to the reader. That to do, is an accomplishment. Basic in delivery. Yet touches emotions few poets are unable to commit the doing of it. Congratulations! L 

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Geeessshhh, this is terrific imagery.
Nice.

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Hmmm, 'Amazing' Huh? Well...okay! (Smile)

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Hi, amandak.. Thank you for your comments. Now and then, I feel I must reveal some insight into my background.

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Hi, JdeLorenzo08. Thank you for your comments. It makes me happy

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Enrique, thank you for ur comment.

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Thank you 4 comments.

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Hi, amandak.45897, thank you very much. Lawrence

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Hi, Edwin...your comments remind me of what I use to experience on another poetry website. Now, today? I make sure what I write is done. Then close out my submission to Poetry.com. I've also changed my password a few times as well. 

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Hi, Edwin Ray...thank you for your latest comments. Although, I must admit this, I have no idea what they mean. Explain.

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Be easy with that Breezy feeling

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I lived on Perrin Beital Road. Between 410 and 1604. The bigger loop surrounding San Antonio. Back in the 80s.

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Hi Edwin. Don't allow your creative process prevent to stop what this 'force' chooses you to do. Through your poetic revelations. Edwin? You and I both have been blessed with a gift. Know this. 

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Edwin? One day we have to meet. You know, I actually lived in San Antonio, Texas yrs ago. I love that place. Thanks again for your 'right on comments'. Wonderful they are to read.

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