Analysis of Commission



The Lord was sitting on His throne,
I saw Him high and lifted up;
His train filled the temple as shown,
While handing to me a cup.

He said it was His blood to drink,
As the seraphim with six wings;
Covered their faces made me think,
Of humbleness that each one brings.

For one called unto another,
Holy, holy, holy the Lord;
As they had turned to each other,
That His glory the earth adored.

The foundations shook at His voice,
As the temple was filled with smoke;
All the angels then did rejoice,
While my thoughts and my lips spoke.

Woe is me! Because I am lost,
I am one with an unclean tongue;
For my sins have caused such a cost,
From impurities that were flung.

Then a seraphim flew unto me,
Puts a burning coal on my tongue;
While the Lord made a decree,
My entire mouth had felt stung.

He said that I was forgiven,
Any guilt is taken away;
My sins purged to enter Heaven,
If I continue to obey.  

Copyright © 2021 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH XIXI JIJI KLKL E
Poetic Form
Metre 01110111 11110101 11101011 1101101 11111111 101111 10110111 111111 11110010 10101001 11111110 11100101 00101111 10101111 10101101 1110111 11101111 11111011 11111101 10100101 1011101 10101111 1011001 10101111 11111010 10111001 11111010 11010101 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 917
Words 182
Sentences 9
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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Vision of the Lord Isaiah 6:1–7

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Written on September 30, 2021

Submitted by richards.77936 on September 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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