Analysis of Life Through You

Zavier Davis 2009 (Cinncinati OH)



Seeing your beauty, I'm easily charmed
Together our obstacles lay unarmed
Who knew this spark would turn into a blaze?
How could a man like me avert his gaze?
My mind scrambles, my words are loose
My thoughts misbehave, you easily seduce
The untamed thought that come to mind
Through your eyes, life I find
We touch, we see, I fill with lust
Yearning for a kiss, I know I must
Without you I mourn and dread
Longing to see your face ahead
I watch you fly, soar like a dove
For you, make me comprehend love.


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGG
Poetic Form
Metre 1011011001 01010100101 1111110101 1101110111 11101111 1101110001 0111111 111111 11111111 101011111 0111101 10111101 11111101 1111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 506
Words 100
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 396
Words per stanza (avg) 97

About this poem

I wrote this to a significant other and realized it was good. I just want others to see it.

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Written on May 25, 2023

Submitted by zavierd162 on June 07, 2023

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