Analysis of Who Would I Be

Barbara A Cadogan 1944 (Barbados)



If I were a fly on the wall
Invisible, I could hear and see  it all.
Not that I could care less,
A fly is such a pest!
I would rather just be me.

How would it feel to be a dove ?
A symbol of peace and love.
Just to fly and float above,
But really nothing to ponder of.
I would rather just be me.

A lofty pine so I could see
Far above the other tree,
But they would cut me down
And supply the paper mills in town.
I would rather just be me.

To be a rose, beautiful and fragrant,
Long stemmed, graceful and elegant.
This could be a possibility.
But roses fade and die - A liability!
I would rather just be me.

Would I be a horse? Handsome and strong
Flirting with my mare all day long?
A horse is subjected to abuse
From a taskmaster’s overuse.
I would rather just be me.

Just to be content with who I am
Takes no effort, but a plan
I am unique, no one else I’d be.
Secure, determined, it’s plain to see
I would rather just be me.


Scheme aaxxB ccccB bbddB eebbB ffxxB xxbbB
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 11001101 01001110111 111111 011101 1110111 11111101 0101101 1110101 110101101 1110111 01011111 1010101 111111 001010101 1110111 1101100010 11100100 11100100 11010100100 1110111 111011001 10111111 011010101 10101 1110111 111101111 1110101 110111111 010101111 1110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 942
Words 222
Sentences 19
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

This poem is a reminder that we can only be ourselves, nothing or no one else. We were created uniquely and every living creature has its advantages and disadvantages.

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Written on September 29, 2023

Submitted by BACH54 on September 29, 2023

Modified by BACH54 on October 04, 2023

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Barbara A Cadogan

I am a retired Registered Nurse living in St. Augustine, Florida. I started writing poetry at age 18 years. I have been a member of Poetry organizations such as The World of Poetry and Poetry. Com. Participating at annual conventions I enjoy writing in various styles and on different topics. I love poetry that is light and filled with humor. more…

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