Analysis of She died In My Mind



I loved her, yet time passed and she died
Her body however, was never found.
That's because she died in my mind
She lives, but not in my life

Poets say eyes resemble the blue sky
They can shine, yet sometimes they cry
When a heart breaks,
the eye rains;
Sometimes a drizzle or maybe pouring rain.
Yet, my eyes have never seen a cloudless sky
for a long time
Not because she left, but because she died

You were the sun that shined my days
Yet now you're the pouring rain
And it is sad the fact that
I was always the sunflower.
Rain is beautiful and still so are you
But I can't tolerate the drops of dew on my petals

You died, a star burned who shined the brightest
You died, but our beautiful memories still remain.


Scheme AXXX BBXXCBXA XCXXXX XC
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 110111011 010101101 10111011 1111011 1011010011 11110111 1011 011 01010110101 11111010101 1011 1011110111 10011111 1110101 0111011 111010 1110001111 1111001111110 1101111010 11110100100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 723
Words 150
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 8, 6, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

I better not explain this because somethings are better to be discovered than explained. People really liked this poem of mine. :-) A friend of mine made this poem into a song and you can listen to it here: https://t.me/emileandhispoetry/793

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Written on September 30, 2023

Submitted by Emile on March 16, 2024

Modified by Emile on March 16, 2024

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I LOVE THE MOON THE SKY THE STARS!!!!! i also love doggosssss and sunflowers and pouring rain!!!! i hope i become an amazing poem someday. Join my telegram channel i usually post poems there too :))): https://t.me/emileandhispoetry more…

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