Analysis of She died In My Mind
I loved her, yet time passed and she died
Her body however, was never found.
That's because she died in my mind
She lives, but not in my life
Poets say eyes resemble the blue sky
They can shine, yet sometimes they cry
When a heart breaks,
the eye rains;
Sometimes a drizzle or maybe pouring rain.
Yet, my eyes have never seen a cloudless sky
for a long time
Not because she left, but because she died
You were the sun that shined my days
Yet now you're the pouring rain
And it is sad the fact that
I was always the sunflower.
Rain is beautiful and still so are you
But I can't tolerate the drops of dew on my petals
You died, a star burned who shined the brightest
You died, but our beautiful memories still remain.
Scheme | AXXX BBXXCBXA XCXXXX XC |
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Poetic Form | Etheree (35%) Tetractys (25%) |
Metre | 110111011 010101101 10111011 1111011 1011010011 11110111 1011 011 01010110101 11111010101 1011 1011110111 10011111 1110101 0111011 111010 1110001111 1111001111110 1101111010 11110100100101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 723 |
Words | 150 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 8, 6, 2 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 140 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 35 |
About this poem
I better not explain this because somethings are better to be discovered than explained. People really liked this poem of mine. :-) A friend of mine made this poem into a song and you can listen to it here: https://t.me/emileandhispoetry/793
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