Inside Take Me
Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)
Take me in.
Allow me to tour,
Inside of you more.
With us both,
Exposing our emotions and feelings felt.
Kept to deny yet recognized outside,
A trusting wanted.
But a distrusting that hides,
That deep wish concealed to reveal it.
I am that someone that comes to share,
Your thoughts.
Wants, dreams and needs to wish.
I am that someone here and near,
To satisfy and please...
Misunderstandings to correct,
Whatever before had for you...
Had gone neglected by someone else.
Know this to notice it here and now.
Only together to compare and share,
Our emotions felt to feel them expressed.
Has nothing to do with weakness.
But strength.
And that strength,
Can only become stronger.
If we together,
Nourish to encourage each other...
To remain honest.
Forgiving and respectful!
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Submitted by lpahtillah on August 19, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 746 |
Words | 132 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 9, 8, 11 |
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