talygarza
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This anti war poem is heartbreaking, no words to express the enormous pain wars bring although this human tendency to violence and self destruction continues between groups or nations. This poem is indicative of the tragedy behind every single life that ends in wars. more »

This poem brings good vibes for someone who feels hopeless, a bad emotion that human beings often carries.

oh no is just practice, I try to write all days at least one page. No imitation and if I can I like rhymes in Spanish, although I love free verse I distrust enthusiasm about free verse, anyway I respect the right to write whatever a person wants. more »

Dramatic, stunning image, another stanza would be grate enhancing the poem.

I liked the sincerity showing a detachment, you could explore more that kind of emotions, not everything needs to be about happiness, the thing is to write something that can engage readers.

of course

This poem is more deep expressing situations in poetic form.

Interesting poem, I understand that explores emotions like sadness, pain, desolation, hopeless not finding an exit to that.

Is touching when reading poems about aging. Congrats.

I liked the vivid description you gave about the elements of a caring garden and the person who keeps it, transporting the reader to that place.

Lovely image, next time I’m going to be more attentive to lighthouses they offer so much to poetic ideas.

thanks I loved it too, looks great near my poem isn’t?

thanks, although I must say that I’m not satisfied with the things I write, anyway I like writing.

Lovely celebration of nature and its flourishing during spring through the device of trees, expressed with clarity without excess.

Wise poem; words can hurt or shock the peace.